My elevator pitch is based on the idea of creating a robot that cleans up puppy mess. In my pitch, I am relatable, clear, concise and convincing. I express my idea eloquently and I support the ideas that I put forth. I am acting like I am speaking to a room full of people, listening intently to my idea. I am wearing a gator sweat shirt to express my relations to the university, the people I am speaking with, and to provide credibility that I know what I'm talking about because I got a good education.
Enjoy my elevator pitch:
I really enjoyed your post and the energy in your delivery of this product. As the pet industry is ever expanding and now well into the billion I could definitely see the applicability of this product and its ability to do well. Great idea and great presentation.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Max; great energy. The only constructive criticism I could offer would be to explain more in depth about how the device would work. That would really convince me that it would be worth some money. My first question would be "how can I be sure it will do a thorough job?" If you could explain exactly how it would remove odor, stain, and bacteria, I would be more inclined to believe the claim. Great elevator pitch!
ReplyDeleteGood job with this elevator pitch! I liked how excited you sounded about your product. This is especially important when trying to convince a group of investors or people to like your product. If you do not sound invested in this product then they will not be. Overall, I like your idea of a robot cleaner (who wouldn't.) Raising a puppy can be incredibly tiresome and a dog robot would be especially useful.
ReplyDeleteGood job with this elevator pitch! I liked how excited you sounded about your product. This is especially important when trying to convince a group of investors or people to like your product. If you do not sound invested in this product then they will not be. Overall, I like your idea of a robot cleaner (who wouldn't.) Raising a puppy can be incredibly tiresome and a dog robot would be especially useful.
ReplyDeleteHi Megan,
ReplyDeleteI loved your elevator pitch! Delivering the post with so much energy definitely makes the audience more excited about the product. I recently bought a puppy so would definitely be a customer.